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Chapter one begins over dramatically. “The sky foretells a coming tragedy” Hmm. Then it overdoses on painting a grim frozen landscape. A lone girl is hunting with her bow, catches a paltry elk, then takes the bloody, dripping mess home only to search for her missing sister. Wren (lol) is worried for her younger, prettier sister Elora who is blissfully unconcerned.
— Apr 24, 2023 09:11AM
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