Lori Baldi’s Reviews > Mad About Maddie > Status Update
Lori Baldi
is on page 20 of 320
These last pages were quite an improvement over the Prologue. The hero & heroine met and sparks were flying. Things look promising although the writing still seems raw somehow.
— May 24, 2011 08:12AM
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Lori Baldi
is on page 260 of 320
I'm really just skimming through the book. Continues to feel rather amateurish. Much repetitive sentences. Nothing happens. The plot is really flat. I only continue because it will be fast to finish. I could really skip to the end since nothing happens.
— May 31, 2011 08:47AM
Lori Baldi
is on page 70 of 320
An agreeable read. The writing still feels amateurish.
— May 26, 2011 07:32AM
Lori Baldi
is on page 30 of 320
Curious scene near the beginning of the book where the hero suddenly starts to kiss the heroine out of nowhere. He doesn't like her, doesn't trust her but feels this crazy need to kiss her. Crazy.
— May 25, 2011 06:38AM
Lori Baldi
is on page 5 of 320
Just starting the Prelude to the book. The heroine was not promising in that she was laughing during the funeral. Not a promising start.
— May 23, 2011 09:00AM
