Annisa’s Reviews > Den of Vipers > Status Update

Update, it’s gotten a little better. FMC is still insufferable, I’m just super disappointed in the potential for the character. As hard as the author tries to make her seem strong and brave it just makes her seem weaker.

Alright I realized the book is translated which explains the grammar.

FMC inner monologue is still cringey and annoying, but the spice makes it better.

Now she talks to her vagina? *eye roll*
Still extremely cringey in her POV. Something is also off with the grammar in this book idk if it’s an editing issue but I’m finding a lot of run-on sentences and clauses that don’t make sense.

“We have been kind so far, now?” Makes no sense, but contextually it should say “we’ve been kind so far….but now?” There’s a lot of these.

The POV is first person but very strange. Almost like it’s trying to break the fourth wall in a way? Too descriptive and awkward. Hopefully it’ll just blend in after a while