Lillian Francis’s Reviews > Let There Be Light > Status Update
Lillian Francis
is 18% done
Nearly lost my interest in the first 10%.There was far too much convoluted description in the name of world-building, which combined with several editing errors, took some struggling through.
Now we have some dialogue things are improving.
— Apr 13, 2015 05:12AM
Now we have some dialogue things are improving.
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Lillian Francis
is 63% done
Just you and me in a room until one of us breaks.
No, not a direct quote, but it might as well be.
63% & it's just been the two MCs in a tower, talking around their past in a convoluted way that leaves the reader feeling like an outsider. Now a dastardly plot has been revealed... but i'm more interested whether Hart is going to give it up. Come on, man, you've been pining for years & it's done you no good.
— Apr 13, 2015 10:17PM
No, not a direct quote, but it might as well be.
63% & it's just been the two MCs in a tower, talking around their past in a convoluted way that leaves the reader feeling like an outsider. Now a dastardly plot has been revealed... but i'm more interested whether Hart is going to give it up. Come on, man, you've been pining for years & it's done you no good.
