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I dont even know, i don't hate this book, I see what the author wanted this book to be and it could've been that if the author... made her world more palpable or feel realer, but I guess faint fairytale-esque with little substance is the mood. Even so, even the plot with the sister wasn't... well done, pls surprise me & make the sister innocent.
— May 08, 2023 02:19PM
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While this book doesn't feel like a 1st draft of itself like ACOMAF does, it does feel... empty. No real plot happens,It's just a fieldtrip of stuff happening that's not ever mentioned as being a thing that exists in this world, the world isn't built at all, we're told of it. Even that is so these two can finally have a heart to heart the author obviously needs them to. Wanna b enemies to lovrs
— May 08, 2023 02:23PM