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Josie
is 91% done
The dialogue is pretty bad... Somethings just didn't make sense or didn't need to be said.
— May 10, 2023 11:14AM
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Josie
is 91% done
I am not going to give up... I never DNF books... I really think I would love this book if some things were taken out of it. I love Xander and I really don't like Lanie.... I like Becca, Ty an Logan better than her... TO MUCH UNNEEDED DRAMA.
— May 10, 2023 10:24AM
Josie
is 66% done
I feel like the author didn't pay attention to what she was writing because she would write one thing and then it would change completely or contradict what she had already wrote.... Again to much unneeded things added that I think ruined the story.
— May 09, 2023 09:55AM
Josie
is 66% done
So for the first half I couldn't put it down... There defiantly was a few things that could have been left out and sometimes it felt like things were just put in the book to make it longer, but I really liked the story. I loved that they fell in love right away and we didn't spend most of the book with them going back and fourth and pretending that they didn't like each other. But now I am dragging. To much drama.
— May 09, 2023 09:51AM

