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Rachel
is 36% done
Ridley keeps talking about her sister but Jackson doesn't find it odd. She let him introduce her as Ridley to everyone at the party when she should be pretending she's Raina.
— Apr 14, 2015 06:35PM
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Rachel
is 16% done
The characters talk to themselves a lot. It would have been better to not have the short scene with Raina's point of view.
— Apr 14, 2015 03:09PM
