V.P. Nightshade’s Reviews > Beguiled by the Beastly Baron > Status Update
V.P. Nightshade
is 47% done
The writing's disjointed; it makes you feel like you're JUMPING from scene to scene instead of FLOWING. I couldn't tell you the type of monster the Baron is, he's dangerously magical and weird. Antonia seems to be 'something' too. She finds out that her deceased father gambled her hand in marriage to the Baron, and then she agrees to marry him. My question is why? I am not feeling a connection btwn the 2 of them.
— May 16, 2023 07:57AM
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V.P. Nightshade
is 94% done
I'm unsure on rating this book. The writing's choppy & I feel like small but important bits of the plot were cut during editing w/o regard to how it would effect the story. I have to admit I don't like Antonia, she's a weak woman. Her totally unmedicated mental issues cause major problems & she needs serious help! I've decided that I like the Baron, but I wonder if it's really pity because he is stuck w/ Antonia.
— May 17, 2023 10:51PM
