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Kioyte
is on page 255 of 358
Sigh, what happened to good editors?
Please don't use the same adjectives repeatedly and definitely not a few sentences apart. That said, it's still a good story, and I think I know, but not sure and there's a 100 pages left, that's a good thing.
— May 16, 2023 07:38PM
Please don't use the same adjectives repeatedly and definitely not a few sentences apart. That said, it's still a good story, and I think I know, but not sure and there's a 100 pages left, that's a good thing.
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Kioyte
is on page 215 of 358
Puppies kittens and transgenders, oh my...
Oh ffs
— May 15, 2023 11:10PM
Oh ffs
Kioyte
is on page 100 of 358
**sort of spoiler**
1) If I had known death of puppies & kitties were part of the story, I'd have pitched it into the trash.
2) Fairly good writing disintegrates to 7th grade creative writing on occasion
3) Can't I read a current book without the liberal agenda peppered into it?
It's interesting enough I'll continue and so far l haven't figured it out (unusual because most often by page 20, I know the outcome
— May 14, 2023 05:29PM
1) If I had known death of puppies & kitties were part of the story, I'd have pitched it into the trash.
2) Fairly good writing disintegrates to 7th grade creative writing on occasion
3) Can't I read a current book without the liberal agenda peppered into it?
It's interesting enough I'll continue and so far l haven't figured it out (unusual because most often by page 20, I know the outcome
