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Brooke
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I don't care about the characters. The jumping slightly back and forth in time serves no purpose. And the endless comma splices--make it stop!
— May 17, 2023 08:22PM
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Brooke
is on page 281 of 439
Not enjoying this at all. Don't care about any of the characters. The jumping slightly forward and back in time is pointless. And God help me with the comma splices, which always trip me up and leave me crabby. I just want this book to end. Don't care how.
— May 17, 2023 08:19PM