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Frustrations with the editing and order of the chapters. One chapter started "4 hours earlier", letting the reader/listener to believe the events would have happened earlier than the previous chapter. Not the case, it was 4 hours before the following chapter - wouldn't it have made more sense to have that chapter start with "4 hours later."

Book is definitely too long and much of the inner dialogue could be cut.