Khaalidah Muhammad-Ali’s Reviews > The Summer Prince > Status Update
Khaalidah Muhammad-Ali
is 70% done
The narration is lovely.
The MC, June, is petulant, angsty, and has started t work my nerves.
The world building is a little weak but the concepts and ideas for this futuristic Brazil are intriguing and well woven into the narrative.
— Apr 21, 2015 07:30PM
The MC, June, is petulant, angsty, and has started t work my nerves.
The world building is a little weak but the concepts and ideas for this futuristic Brazil are intriguing and well woven into the narrative.
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Khaalidah Muhammad-Ali
is 15% done
Wow. This is not what I expected. The prose is extraordinary and alive, but despite this, so far, so much of the descriptions leave me somehow confused. So far there's a lot of angstyness, which isn't bad as long as the main character has some growth. That remains to be seen as things are just getting started.
— Apr 08, 2015 05:27PM
