Megzz’s Reviews > In the Long Run > Status Update

Sweet, cute - but a little too easy. Not really hooked, missing some angst. Is it coming?

Struggling a little to get into this one - but I see the potential. I feel I'm missing important parts of the story though given they've known each other most of their lives and everything that has happened in the past is just implied instead of narrated. I love a good flashback... hope there are some later