AJ’s Reviews > Kiss Her Once for Me > Status Update

If I had to take a shot every time the main character 1.) says her love interest smells like bread 2.) mentions labels of LGBTQ and forces it into a conversation 3.) lists a name of a song… I’d have alcohol poisoning. It’s fine reading those things the first five time, but now it’s a large amount, like twenty or thirty. As an writer, get more creative.