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Is the word "creamy" used to describe the color of her throat? I really don't understand this strange choice of words. And the way the characters' eyes are always being described makes it seem like they look like this:
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— Apr 27, 2015 11:50PM
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Maxi
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I hope Liv gets rescued soon. This whole Scourge business is boring.
— Apr 30, 2015 08:54PM
Maxi
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Baird could have just unbuttoned Liv's damned blouse. Geez Louise!
— Apr 30, 2015 05:42PM
Maxi
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Is the main character about to get raped? For some strange reason, I hope so. Unless Liv decides to say well, fuck it and embraces her inner slut.
— Apr 30, 2015 05:07PM
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So let me see if I've got these weeks right: Week 1 is the holding week, Week 2 is the bathing week, Week 3 is the tasting week and Week 4 is the bonding week." Sounds legit!
— Apr 29, 2015 02:30PM
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"It was open enough for Sylvan to see her creamy throat and just a hint of cleavage."
Is the word "creamy" used to describe the color of her throat? I really don't understand this strange choice of words. And the way the characters' eyes are always being described makes it seem like they look like this:
— Apr 27, 2015 11:49PM
Is the word "creamy" used to describe the color of her throat? I really don't understand this strange choice of words. And the way the characters' eyes are always being described makes it seem like they look like this:

