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wellreadmami is 30% done
This book has 74 chapters and is divided in 3 parts. I am on chapter 20, about to finish the first part and so far it’s a struggle to continue. It has been slow, predictable, and the trainings scenes too long. Very rarely are training scenes interesting, unless the character is going through some special transformation it’s better to keep them short imo.

Anyways, it has great reviews so we’ll see…
Jun 12, 2023 05:36AM
The Will of the Many (Hierarchy, #1)

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