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Jerry
is 46% done
OMG the scene of the two sisters families bringing a bitch fight between the Uptight Bitch Christian and the loving accepting mother of a gay son. Well written, totally realistic and exhausting to read.
— May 06, 2015 09:45PM
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Jerry
is 46% done
I know authors shorten some elements of a story to focus on just what they want you to and I can understand that. When you plan out a book around religion and one of the supporting characters is the MC's father and the preacher and you are in church, please at least acknowledge that a church service is more than the sermon. Most churches do not start with the sermon...its at least half way thru or even at the end.
— May 06, 2015 08:52PM
