Status Updates From Braden's Story

Too much telling, not enough showing and no editing at all (if someone did proofread this, they need to get into another line of work). The ONLY reason I finished it is I adored Braden and wanted to know what happened to him.

Really good story, but sweet Jesus, the spelling and grammar mistakes. Not to mention it reads like it was written by a teenage girl. Drama! everywhere, everyone saying "gonna"... Proper editing would've been a big help.

This is one of the bast gay oriented stories I have ever read. I immediately ordered and read "Aaron's Story" by the same author. I am quite sorry that there aren't anymore books along this story line.

OMG the scene of the two sisters families bringing a bitch fight between the Uptight Bitch Christian and the loving accepting mother of a gay son. Well written, totally realistic and exhausting to read.

I know authors shorten some elements of a story to focus on just what they want you to and I can understand that. When you plan out a book around religion and one of the supporting characters is the MC's father and the preacher and you are in church, please at least acknowledge that a church service is more than the sermon. Most churches do not start with the sermon...its at least half way thru or even at the end.