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Jennifer
is finished
Too much telling, not enough showing and no editing at all (if someone did proofread this, they need to get into another line of work). The ONLY reason I finished it is I adored Braden and wanted to know what happened to him.
— May 25, 2015 09:19AM
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Jennifer
is 69% done
Really good story, but sweet Jesus, the spelling and grammar mistakes. Not to mention it reads like it was written by a teenage girl. Drama! everywhere, everyone saying "gonna"... Proper editing would've been a big help.
— May 24, 2015 12:55PM
