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Jenn is 25% done
My page count is different than the one listed. I'm having trouble getting into this, it has potential sure but the switching between the first and third person really bugs me.
Jun 09, 2011 10:23AM
Blood & Spirits (The Coming Storm, #1)

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Jenn is on page 139 of 310
So my ebook reader says there are 789 pages, but whatever. I need a break. I was impressed with a compelling opening, but I'm starting to get a headache. First of all you can't switch between the third and first person it's confusing and it's just not done. Secondly the plot runs in so many different directions it's got my head spinning.
May 30, 2011 05:05AM
Blood & Spirits (The Coming Storm, #1)


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