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"You're not nothing to me," he said, almost to himself. "That's precisely the problem."

// Um, excuse me? The two of you have not interacted and known each other long enough to have significant feelings for each other. Maybe I'm just projecting, but it's truly an eye-roll moment for me when a story shoves the love story in my face. I've never been able to suspend disbelief during those scenes, and that applies here.
Jun 26, 2023 11:20AM
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Alastair's mouth flattened. "I tried cutting the trees down once. But they simply spring back up, straight from the marble floor." He turned to me. "The fruit rarely releases, and only for a suminaire."

// Why am I not surprised that she's a suminaire? And why is she surprised that Alastair would unreasonably punish one of the twins? When did he ever show sense from her point of view? *sigh*
Jun 26, 2023 11:38AM
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