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So I just started reading this but came across something in the book that annoyed me... So the main character says how quenching fires is normally a simple task for him implying he's done it before and yet it was only like moments earlier that he even got his powers... These types of continuity errors tend to bug me alot... Hope there won't be more of them further in.
May 16, 2015 03:35AM
Fimbulwinter (Daniel Black, #1)

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