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Sully
is 17% done
This book feels like it’s somehow written for middle grade (with it’s random exclamation points!) and literary readers (with random descriptions that wander on without adding to the plot) and erotic readers (did we really need to know he dries the “fire of red hair between her legs”? No, we did not). The voice is all over the place. It makes no sense.
— Jul 03, 2023 03:55PM
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Sully
is 8% done
For an epic boss battle with a dragon, the opening pacing is so slow and bogged down with backstory.
— Jul 03, 2023 12:19PM

