Deepa’s Reviews > Sicilian's Bride For A Price > Status Update
Deepa
is 50% done
Not bad. Speeds the last 10%. Same conflict as one of her previous mmc in the Italian Heir — love not being real. But differentiates on the transaction fear. Also liked Allisha pt how unfair it was to blame his mom for his dad’s crimes. Allisha wanting to be loved in someway not necessarily overtly or with words but to matter seemed in line with her fear about her dad.
— Jul 04, 2023 10:13PM
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Deepa
is 80% done
Was curious about Allisha’s parents’ divorce and loved their plot. Overall positive
— Jul 04, 2023 10:27PM
Deepa
is 70% done
My only criticism was the orphaning both mc(s) and idk if I mind story wise but it is an observation idk that I think Nitin’s unreasonable to feel unhappy about Dante’s appointment into HIS own fam biz. I think it would be cool to present in non malicious but genuine way. I too would be doubtful to have an outsider’s put at the top of our fam biz.
— Jul 04, 2023 10:24PM
Deepa
is 60% done
It took me the long path to understand Pammi favors soap opera conventions. Intense, corded tension and conflict. Bit of weighty burdens and trauma. I just run with. The quick ending was not so abrupt either.
— Jul 04, 2023 10:17PM
