bunny’s Reviews > Fourth Wing > Status Update
bunny
is 10% done
I know the beginning of a book is supposed to be info dumping for context and world building etc but there is so much “this is to the north and this is to the south and textiles come from this region” and so on. There is no seamless integration of information and so much of it is just stated. A lot of “do you know about this?” With a response of “ya when so and so did this in this year with these people?”
— Jul 06, 2023 07:54PM
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bunny
is 75% done
The writing in this is somewhat painful but the plot is really good. For someone who is lauded as being SO smart, the FMC is incredibly dumb. Also, when she’s nervous, she starts reciting facts to calm her down and it’s definitely just trying to give us info but it could have been done so much better. I maintain my complaint there’s no seamless integration of info dumping
— Jul 08, 2023 06:38AM

