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Kristina
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So the conflict of this is that she’s frustrated by her lack of rights and being disregarded because she’s a woman, so the author’s solution is to have the hero fix everything with his power and money, thus proving that she’s an independent woman? Or….?
The author missed the point of her own book. 🤦🏼♀️
— Jul 07, 2023 08:25PM
The author missed the point of her own book. 🤦🏼♀️
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Kristina
is 92% done
Thoughts on winking heroes: Yay or nay?
I’m firmly nay on this one. Winking is best left to creepy uncles.
— Jul 08, 2023 05:54PM
I’m firmly nay on this one. Winking is best left to creepy uncles.
Kristina
is 73% done
Ugh I’m so tired of the death bed promise being the motivator for a character’s actions. This is like the third one this month for me.
— Jul 08, 2023 10:00AM
Kristina
is 40% done
I went into this expecting something different I think. This is very light fare and fluffy when I thought it would be more introspective and have more historical context. It’s not bad, I just had to reset my expectations early on.
The conflict is weak though and it’s not going to hold up for the entire book. This is not enemies to lovers at all.
— Jul 06, 2023 07:15PM
The conflict is weak though and it’s not going to hold up for the entire book. This is not enemies to lovers at all.
Kristina
is 10% done
This is original and unoriginal at the same time. I wish the writing was better, I can deal with the many tropes when the writing has depth. 😢
— Jul 05, 2023 07:18PM
Kristina
is 3% done
Ugh. The writing style is too simplistic for the subject matter.
— Jul 05, 2023 04:12PM
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Sheesh. 🙄
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It’s making me laugh.. maybe don’t try to write a great feminist romance if you do damsel in distress trope. Ahahahaha
Sorta reminds me of a recent read where the author was obv pushing to show how awesome & strong independent women are whilst still being compassionate caregivers, then has the FMC whining, dithering, & treating her beta male love interest like garbage for the whole book.
When the author is unaware of her own subtext.
*dun dun DUN* They also point to overly kind beta readers, because otherwise these things wouldn’t pass without (at minimum) some textual acknowledgment.
Yes. Ideas alone don’t get trophies, execution must be good too. This author got a pass because of an idea.
