Ravencrantz’s Reviews > The Emergence > Status Update
Ravencrantz
is 7% done
i know im not that far in yet but every time his wife starts talking hes like "idk what shes saying i stopped listening to her" why are you doing this?? thats so rude?? youre our main character??
— May 22, 2015 07:39PM
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Ravencrantz
is 89% done
i feel like im missing pieces?? all of a sudden its like information is missing. i mean its usually all info dump disguised as shitty dialogue and now its just assume we know things? also when did they get back to the main group that was completely skipped over one second they were at the mart then suddenly they were back with everyone else.
— May 25, 2015 08:24PM
Ravencrantz
is 62% done
oh my god are you seriously yelling at someone in a coma telling them to wake up
— May 23, 2015 07:54PM
Ravencrantz
is 59% done
chocolate is delicious don't get me wrong but when you're trying to survive an apocalypse that's like the last thing you want to eat so stop offering it to everyone unless there are dementors around
— May 23, 2015 07:45PM
Ravencrantz
is 57% done
i dont care about ANYONE in this book. everyone is dull and the voice is just so annoying. this book gives me a headache....
— May 23, 2015 07:35PM
Ravencrantz
is 33% done
ugggh can you stop shoving every woman aside like she's some fragile flower that must be protected? this is male protag ego boost all over
— May 23, 2015 05:58PM
Ravencrantz
is 28% done
im like 280000% done oh my god the writing is just awful and i hate the main character so much the only thing keeping me going is the premise but even that is wearing thin. were this not for review, id have stopped by now
— May 23, 2015 05:29PM
Ravencrantz
is 11% done
wait why didnt they notice the two people sitting in the car but saw the lady on the balcony. wouldnt the peoplw in the car be an easier target instead of climbing the wall of a building??
— May 22, 2015 08:04PM