Honest Mabel’s Reviews > Draekon Warrior > Status Update
Honest Mabel
is 14% done
The first book starts good then takes sharp turns in the unexpected but not in a good way imho. It just seems contrived
— Jul 13, 2023 10:07AM
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Honest Mabel
is 40% done
I really want to like this but it needed an editor or more beta readers bc some scenes and how they play out don’t make sense at all then the next scene it’s slightly backtracked but it makes it confusing to follow
— Jul 13, 2023 11:26AM
