Honest Mabel’s Reviews > Draekon Warrior > Status Update

I really want to like this but it needed an editor or more beta readers bc some scenes and how they play out don’t make sense at all then the next scene it’s slightly backtracked but it makes it confusing to follow

That 4% between 32-36% way too fucking rushed

The first book starts good then takes sharp turns in the unexpected but not in a good way imho. It just seems contrived