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Joey
is on page 40 of 379
I know the point of books like this is the spiciness and the drama but is it so much to ask for just a few chapters of character development / world building? And maybe a little more build up than “thy interacted for exactly two pages and now she is obsessed with him”? It doesn’t have to be a slow burn but maybe just a some burn?
— Jul 15, 2023 06:34AM
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Joey
is on page 300 of 379
I’m sorry but is Persephone narcoleptic? She is constantly falling asleep.
— Jul 16, 2023 04:30PM
Joey
is on page 232 of 379
In defense of this book I just prefer a slow burn. And characters with personalities. A complete paragraphs. And a plot.
— Jul 16, 2023 08:10AM
Joey
is on page 110 of 379
Does the line “the two had been friends ever since” need to follow the introduction of any character Persephone gets along with?
— Jul 16, 2023 07:53AM
Joey
is on page 193 of 379
I know this is just a fantasy / wish fulfillment / spicy book but I wish Persephone had a personality. What’s her motivation? What makes her special? Why is Hades so instantly drawn to her? Give her something to work with other than the obliviousness and slinky dresses and getting into mishaps that are extremely avoidable that seem to define her entire personality.
— Jul 16, 2023 07:35AM
Joey
is on page 103 of 379
…I’m sorry but she just walked through a wall, down a mountain, and decided to take a swim in the Styx for *checks notes* literally no reason. And we’re supposed to root for her?
— Jul 15, 2023 04:47PM
Joey
is on page 34 of 379
She wanted to “demand a lesson in the anatomy of his body” Omg I hate this book so much already.
— Jul 14, 2023 09:53PM
