kimberly_rose’s Reviews > No Good Deed > Status Update
kimberly_rose
is 14% done
This far in and I still haven't met Mark, the other mc. I also despise Dan. He's an asshat. Arrogant, entitled, self-centered and narrow. Not a compelling or connecting beginning. I'll give it another chapter, and it better be amaze-pants.
— May 28, 2015 02:56PM
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kimberly_rose
is 36% done
Nope, not working for me. I don't like the narrator, Chan. He's cold and too matter-of-fact, telling the story extremely dryly, like cardboard. I might've liked it if it at least had an alternating perspective with Mark as another first person narrator. Or even limited third. Mark seemed like a character I would feel keening inside of his skin.
— May 29, 2015 06:39PM
