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Mari
is on page 342 of 684
Sydney, at this point I still don’t get why this character was needed. It feels like she was just added as an “let’s all hate the phsyco tall girl” trope, yes that’s a trope. Especially with most indie authors in the last 10 years.
— Jul 24, 2023 06:32PM
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Mari
is on page 350 of 684
Addies chapters are boring, I find myself skimming them, in a rush to get to Zades POV
— Jul 24, 2023 06:46PM
Mari
is on page 342 of 684
Up until this point, the book has had no romance. Just dark, detailed rape scenes. Rape of the FMC, in detail. That, I also found unnecessary.
Addy isn’t saved until 300 pages in. I don’t consider rape “spice”. It’s sad that it was sold that way to the readers
— Jul 24, 2023 06:39PM
Addy isn’t saved until 300 pages in. I don’t consider rape “spice”. It’s sad that it was sold that way to the readers
