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Jul 26, 2023 04:52AM
I gave up after Vindolanda :) story jus dinny flow for me
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Andy wrote: "I gave up after Vindolanda :) story jus dinny flow for me"I quite enjoyed The Fort as Goldsworthy writes some great battle scenes. But the lack of flow is precisely the problem here. It’s all over the place.
