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Already doing a lot of suspending belief. You can’t burn oil paintings, especially in a tiny cabin in a fireplace, unless you want to die a toxic death. You’re also not going to be pulling leeches off yourself if you are on dry ground. Clearly, some simple research could have helped in the first couple chapters.
— Aug 02, 2023 11:12AM
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Ame
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Sunset is 4-5 pm. Fire and heavy jacket needed at night. But this character is putting on a swimsuit and going onto a lake in a canoe. Yeah, no. Welcome to hypothermia.
— Aug 02, 2023 11:35AM
Ame
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And now she’s hiking for six hours in the forest with no food or water. Tell me you’ve never been hiking before without telling me you’ve never been hiking before. Again, simple research.
— Aug 02, 2023 11:17AM
