Holly’s Reviews > The Hanging City > Status Update
Holly
is 50% done
Also the writing is acting like she’s some silly lovesick girl who can’t stand up on her own two feet and trips over everything in the woods, but somehow she’s been traveling alone for the last 9 years? Come on.
— Aug 06, 2023 09:07AM
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Holly
is 46% done
Eh it’s pretty cringey. “I peek through loose strands of hair at him”- the constant references to hiding behind her waist length hair, using it to protect her from the sun(???wut???) make me imagine her as Samara from the ring.
Also she’s traveled the world but every reference is in to her father’s house. The room in the Hanging City was as big as her fathers dining room, etc. this is annoying
— Aug 06, 2023 08:53AM
Also she’s traveled the world but every reference is in to her father’s house. The room in the Hanging City was as big as her fathers dining room, etc. this is annoying
