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Lit Reader
is 65% done
The angsty misunderstanding is contrived, and it drags on and on, needlessly ! I can’t take much more of this, Darcy’s mental torture is teenager-like, and based on nothing but unreliable hearsay, which he puzzlingly believes over his own judgement
— Aug 10, 2023 01:32PM
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Lit Reader
is 70% done
Pages and pages of character’s non-conductive internal dialogue !!!! What could have happened, what would have happened, what maybe happened…. how did it make them feel, how to they feel about feeling so, and then what would might have happened again. Tiresome, redundant, circular page filler, bad editing.
— Aug 10, 2023 02:09PM
