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Holly
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Perfect example. Top of the page, "I really didn't want rose's last memories to be of being locked away like a prisoner" then a new paragraph, then in the next paragraph "lily has begun pouring the cereal into bowls" Come on, author - why is he referring to the girl by two different names on the same page?!
— Jun 13, 2015 11:19AM
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Holly
is 57% done
How do they still have two weeks?! Surely it's been that by now
— Jun 13, 2015 12:29PM
Holly
is 34% done
Hmm, suddenly Cole has gone from calling/referring to her as Rose to now referring to her as lily. There seems a few confused moments. The last was the fight scene when I genuinely had no idea which one he'd attacked
— Jun 13, 2015 11:16AM
