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MommaBear
is 85% done
"hug" should be "shrug". This is only one reason I shoild be at least a proofreader. "homely" instead of "homey". These should've been fixed by editor. Just sayin'...
— Jun 13, 2015 11:37AM
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MommaBear
is 96% done
Page 361/ 374 and still no sex. Thought there'd be a crazy threesome a few pages back, but no. Hope it'll be when Alex feeds Dante, SOON.
— Jun 13, 2015 12:43PM
MommaBear
is 92% done
Page 345 "here" should be "her". Tsk, tsk. I won't nit-pick any more, but recommend new editor for sure. No offense intended.
— Jun 13, 2015 12:24PM
MommaBear
is 83% done
Note to self, I want to be Aaron's editor. Lots of little errors that should have been caught. I was an English major after all...
— Jun 13, 2015 11:24AM
MommaBear
is 81% done
Ok. Page 287, they went up to open-air parking lot. On the roof. Got it now. Getting senile I think...plus, read that yesterday, clearly forgot that detail.
— Jun 13, 2015 11:12AM
MommaBear
is 79% done
Page 294. Searchlights find them, but they never left the ground...
— Jun 13, 2015 11:03AM
MommaBear
is 79% done
Wait a minute...on a roof? How? When? They were in the alley...gotta go back, see if I missed the 3 of them going up to a rooftop from the alley...
— Jun 13, 2015 10:59AM
MommaBear
is 69% done
Ah, in the memorial...proves my fatigue and constant interruptions are not conducive to reading!
— Jun 12, 2015 05:04PM
