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It was at pages 30 when it was the first time I wanted to delete the book from my device but I forced myself to read further in hopes it would get better. I cannot enjoy the writing style. There is attempt on bantering but it falls flat. In general, the sentence building feels often clumsy and the words used are very simple. Also the FMC Scarlett behaves often childish with sticking her tongue out and her retorts.
— Aug 11, 2023 01:20PM
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