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I'm very interested in what is going to happen however the constant inner monologues regarding their political opinions is really detracting from the story. It has no bearing on anything whatsoever. I think perhaps the author is trying to establish character with it but there are definitely better ways to do this. It's such a slog to get through those parts just to get back to the story.
Aug 13, 2023 03:51AM
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