Liz’s Reviews > Floor 21 > Status Update
Liz
is 57% done
I don't wanna read about Vick. I hardly remember who he is. He, right?
— Jun 15, 2015 07:00PM
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Liz
is 63% done
If this is a "report," why is he randomly explaining details of the world that his superiors obviously know? Also, I thought the stairwell was loaded with cement or concrete past 21. How do they get any lower?
— Jun 15, 2015 07:27PM
Liz
is 50% done
Why does she still have the recorder, and how is she recording in the courtroom??
— Jun 15, 2015 04:49PM
Liz
is 47% done
Even though I don't like the voice, and think the MC sounds more like a 10 year old boy than a 16 year old girl, and the story was sloooow to start, I'm finally getting into it. Things are getting weird!
— Jun 14, 2015 09:44PM
Liz
is on page 12 of 234
I'm frustrated for 3 reasons. First, the science isn't adding up, but that might have to do with the mystery of the story. The second thing is that this narrator is supposed to be a 17 year old girl, but feels like a 12 year old boy. Lastly, nothing is happening. I loved the first hook, but I need more. Anyway I'm hopeful this will still be good. Just frustrated.
— May 27, 2015 09:05PM
