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WHAT THE HECK THE ENDING JUST AHHH. Last short story didn’t have as big of a shocker plot twist but THIS?! Some things yes predictable like fake Cobb after we confirmed they stole tech, but bruh the last twenty pages were just off the charts unexpected action-packed and shocking.
I like how the story didn’t get boring. Like I was dreading a long sort of time before they were able to rescue rinakin for ex, but
— Aug 14, 2023 11:01AM
I like how the story didn’t get boring. Like I was dreading a long sort of time before they were able to rescue rinakin for ex, but
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Also! I like how the characters do seem to have different voices which is awesome for when they’re narrating in first person and it’s so much fun. Also I’m here for the relationship gags because it’s funny and I will take no criticism for it lol. I also like how Arturo and Alanik aren’t rushed into a relationship in the short story so yay
— Aug 14, 2023 11:07AM
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i dreaded a boring rescue for rinakin, but it was perfect and it was fast and it was nice action for Arturo so BS and JP really know when to switch the pace/setting/convo dynamics in the book.
Also let me just say I’ve always liked Arturo so so much. He is smart and not a stereotype in a way that is true to being in a new planet but also he is kind and smart and did have a cute relationship until it ended.
— Aug 14, 2023 11:05AM
Also let me just say I’ve always liked Arturo so so much. He is smart and not a stereotype in a way that is true to being in a new planet but also he is kind and smart and did have a cute relationship until it ended.
