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Having a real hard time getting through it. The verse is very nice and the plot is excellent. However the narrator is almost completely void of character. Which, granted, may be intended but makes for hard reading.
— Aug 15, 2023 09:32PM
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The last 15 or so pages of the section “The Police Revolution” is some of the most fun I’ve had reading in a while.
— Aug 17, 2023 05:12PM
