Andria’s Reviews > Wolf's Pawn > Status Update

I get lost at times, unsure if its a flash back or skipped forward in time. Also, it's a bit verbose in places- using several synynyms of a word in a paragraph, joking among the friends being detailed too often for my taste.
I get confused by the different names as well, which race, group, person etc is being talked about.
Just needs some editing, word removal, tightening and tidying.
I'd like a glossary.