Mojo_Mama’s Reviews > Twist of Fate > Status Update
Mojo_Mama
is 20% done
Where is the H in this hot mess? He made a 2 page appearance in the longest prologue on record and is MIA. And SO MUCH TELLING...
— Jun 17, 2015 04:33PM
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Mojo_Mama
is 30% done
Trying hard not to DNF this. The first 3rd of this reads like a writer's plot board...so little conversation...just paragraph after paragraph of bad plotting. In 5 paragraphs we go from weird phone calls to h on her way to hiding out on tour. The H better be worth it.
— Jun 17, 2015 04:43PM
Mojo_Mama
is 25% done
Just shoot me now...huge chunks of plot are just flying by in one dry paragraph after another.
— Jun 17, 2015 04:36PM
