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The story line is good, the writing is not. From a detective with experience, comments like “wow” and “oh my God” aren’t reactions that should/would be vocalized. Someone just asks for a pop and she know immediately that they are from the East Coast. That is wrong, people from the Midwest say “pop,” people from the East Coast say soda.
Aug 20, 2023 11:18AM
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