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Dee_Dee
is 15% done
The language is very full and flowery; a thing new/recent authors do. Like they are more focused on convincing the reader that they have a large vocabulary instead of making sentences that flow/read easily.
— Aug 24, 2023 12:45PM
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Dee_Dee
is 4% done
Feel a bit iffy. Heroine is described as around 13. Her brother a few years older with a wife younger than the heroine. Heroine is betrothed to 15 year old. Author stated she wrote this when she was 13 herself, so maybe she didn’t truly understand the ramifications? Language is very formal, it doesn’t flow for me.
— Aug 23, 2023 04:13AM
