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Kat O'Brian
is 33% done
I got about 2 more pages in from my last update and the girls age changed from 4 to 2. Had to scroll back to make sure I wasn’t crazy. Yea she was 4 and now she is 2. Great editing here.
— Aug 28, 2023 02:53PM
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Kat O'Brian
is 32% done
32% of the way in and this story is so damn cheesy, I’m positive it is a script for a porn.
There are several grammatical errors where a sentence isn’t capitalized and that is bugging me.
The child is 4 yet they portray her like she is 18-24 months, so that is also driving me crazy.
— Aug 28, 2023 02:47PM
There are several grammatical errors where a sentence isn’t capitalized and that is bugging me.
The child is 4 yet they portray her like she is 18-24 months, so that is also driving me crazy.
