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I had to physically orz just now, because really??? Really?????????

...I'm sorry, "vowed to avoid"? ...what did you become that you were vowing to avoid?

Ah, another time jump. Wonderful.

Wow, okay. This possible relationship got even creepier. And I don't usually have qualms against fantasy incest. But just...this dude's hangups about it. You're a "distant cousin". I'm more worried about the fact that you used to have a relationship with MC's brother before he was murdered.

Author. Author, no. No, Author. You can't just tell us a characterization point and expect us to believe it when we aren't shown any evidence of it. Don't be Whedon, author. Telling us this was a thing when we had no evidence of it isn't going to make us believe it.

r u srs. srsly. @author u expect me to buy this. like, srsly expect me to. wow

gagging. and not in a good way

Oooookay, that's a really creepy set-up. No way these two can end up lovers. Like, if you wanted to set these up as potential lovers, that was NOT the way to do it O_O

Wow. I tooootaally did NOT expect that at aaaallll. *rolls eyes*