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Dalidja
Dalidja is finished
This had some potential but fell flat for me. There didn't seem to be any real chemistry, just a desire to mate and bed. I don't like when a character betrays their love interest. And just all around a bit dull. The spice was a fail, especially the last one. Him "unveiling her delicious package". And saying how yummy her "clam" is. His "Linguini", his "Noodle". Not arousing, not funny, just cringe.
Aug 31, 2023 01:57PM
Forbidden Mate (Shifters of Bear's Den, #1)

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